NETFUTURE Technology and Human Responsibility -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Issue #83 A Publication of The Nature Institute January 19, 1999 -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Editor: Stephen L. Talbott (stevet@netfuture.org) On the Web: http://netfuture.org You may redistribute this newsletter for noncommercial purposes. CONTENTS -------- Editor's Note Quotes and Provocations Trust Me: I'm Vulnerable How to Beef Up Your Infant's Knowledge Base Imagining a Better Potato When Technology is Smoke and Confusion DEPARTMENTS Letter from Des Moines (Lowell Monke) Wired Schools, Broken Trust Correspondence Does NETFUTURE Hold to a Masculine Standard? (Rebecca Lynn Eisenberg) Response to Rebecca Eisenberg (Stephen L. Talbott) Announcements and Resources The Monsanto Files About this newsletter ========================================================================== EDITOR'S NOTE One of the stranger notions in modern journalism is that every bit of commentary, in order to be relevant, must be given a tie-in to some kind of "breaking news". I hardly need to tell you that this is not the policy of NETFUTURE. Rather, the truth and importance of an item, together with the likelihood that it contains something fresh for most readers, is what I require. That's why, for example, the current issue summarizes and comments on an "ancient" story from last October's New York Times Magazine. That's also why I often do not report "breaking news" such as the Carnegie-Mellon study on Net use and depression or the recent Educational Testing Service study about the effectiveness of computers in teaching math to fourth and eighth graders. As these studies pile up by the hundreds, they do little to affect the attitudes of knowledgeable people -- and for good reason. They give nice, precise numbers that no one has a clue about interpreting. The imbalance between statistic-gathering, on the one hand, and conceptual profundity, on the other, is so great in contemporary social science that almost the only responsible thing for any investigator to do is to work at clarifying and deepening concepts. One needs to struggle to see things in different ways -- even though every such alternative view effectively scrambles all the data gathered from previous vantage points. Take, for example, the computer's use in math education. What exactly is the comprehension, what are the skills, we are trying to teach? You'll recall the piece in NF #80 ("Toddlers as Geometricians") where I cited John Alexandra's remark: We may think ... that we need to get children to memorize the idea that a straight line is the shortest distance between two points. But even one-year-old children already know this: when frightened, they will run to their parents in the straightest of straight lines. At that age, however, they know it only in their legs, where this knowledge is unconscious, asleep. So then: where, on the journey from legs through imaginative consciousness to abstract consciousness, should we look for the straight line in a fourth grader? How would we test for an age-appropriate understanding? And if we test a fourth grader for the most purified, abstract grasp of things (as we must, if we would achieve standardized results), are we taking a measure of the child's long-term cognitive health or of his developing imbalance? Well, these aren't the kinds of question one often finds in the literature. Imagine the social conversations we might have if journalists probed on this level instead of merely passing along the endless stream of statistics from poll and experiment! Statistics always presuppose -- and result from -- the answers we give to questions like those just asked; the problem is that we are not often aware of the answers we have presupposed. In any case, offering people different ways of seeing things is as good a description as any of what I try to do in NETFUTURE. It is gratifying to hear from readers -- as I often do -- that, despite the prevailing journalistic canons, this exercise is appreciated. SLT Goto table of contents ========================================================================== QUOTES AND PROVOCATIONS Trust Me: I'm Vulnerable ------------------------ Phil Agre made an important point about trust a while back. When people talk about building secure mechanisms for electronic commerce so that we can trust each other, they're using the word "trust" in direct opposition to its usual meaning. To trust someone, in normal usage, is precisely to place yourself at a certain risk without formal guarantees of your safety. If you don't trust someone, then you insist on contracts and proof and collateral and documentation and video surveillance and elaborate cryptographic payment protocols and so forth. And if you do trust someone then you don't insist on these things. (Red Rock Eater News Service, Dec. 15, 1998) I've long noticed a parallel oddity in the way people speak of being vulnerable on the Net. As the story often goes, the shy, the outcast, the hurt, and the maladjusted find a safe haven on the Net. They can "risk" expressing their true feelings -- they can be "vulnerable" -- because the medium gives them relative anonymity and the option of a quick disconnect. Lost in this picture, of course, is what vulnerability means: to be at genuine risk. My favorite story is the one told by the young woman who visited online "singles' bars": she didn't need to worry about what she was getting herself into, she said, because as soon as anyone started to misbehave, "Poof! I'm gone." Some vulnerability. (This is not to say that a person who is incapacitated by insecurity may not find temporary therapeutic value in the Net's relative anonymity. But this is less a virtue of networking technology than a failure of the community to embrace and make a place for all its citizens. And surely we ought to hope that the sufferer can exchange invulnerability for normal society as quickly as possible.) That the promise of electronic culture should so commonly be put in terms that mistake human qualities such as trust and vulnerability for their opposites seems to me terribly significant. What we see here, I think, is the projection of our psyches into the external machinery of the Net. The machinery stands in place of the inner work of trust and of risk-taking. We are, as a result, powerfully tempted to abandon the human struggles upon which the future of society hangs. You find the same sort of projection at work when technical networks are mistaken for social networks -- a confusion that overlooks the generally corrosive effect of the former upon the latter. And likewise when information flows are mistaken for learning. (In general, and in most contemporary contexts, the intensification of these flows actually works against learning, for reasons I will be discussing in the near future.) In all these cases, bewitched by the objectified products of our own inner activity, we have lost awareness of the activity itself. More and more we are content to fiddle with computers and the other machinery of our existence while remaining forgetful of ourselves. (See also "Forgetting Ourselves in the Age of Automatons" in NF #23.) How to Beef Up Your Infant's Knowledge Base ------------------------------------------- On Dec. 22 ABC News online ran a little story called "Wired Babies". It began, "Jessica Barton turned 1 this month, but she's already spent more hours in front of a computer than many Americans have in a lifetime." Then it continued: How young is too young for a baby to be put in front of a computer? Child psychologist Will Staso says there is no lower age limit. He even backs up a company's claim that its software, Babywow, makes kids smarter. Babywow displays words and plays sounds in several languages. "These are sounds that a child can't hear in a normal environment", says Staso. "Presenting infants with information that can expand their knowledge base can have a positive effect on their developing intelligence." This item has been sitting on my desk for a couple of weeks while I've been too stunned to know what to say. The knowledge base of an infant? This is what we need to worry about? And the way to help is by playing recorded sounds completely divorced from the child's meaningful interaction with its surroundings? Is it really so urgent to get an early start on the habits of dissociation, the fragmentation of context, that already vitiate modern life? I would challenge Staso to utter a single coherent phrase about the knowledge base of an infant -- an infant, remember, who does not yet even possess language. What really seems to be at work here is the belief that "stimulation is good", period. By itself, this nonsensical belief would justify inflicting random pain on a child. However, it is not stimulation as such that counts, but a warm, nurturing, human environment where the verbal expression is the natural speaking of the overall context. The essential, unitary nature of the infant's world is something Staso, as a psychologist, ought to know a little about. But it doesn't need a psychologist to grasp it. The best description I know of, despite a form of expression we today quite naturally find alien, comes from George MacDonald, a nineteenth-century Scottish cleric: [The infant's inward condition] is one, I venture to say, of absolute, though, no doubt, largely negative faith. Neither memory of pain that is past, nor apprehension of pain to come, once arises to give him the smallest concern. In some way, doubtless very vague, for his being itself is a borderland of awful mystery, he is aware of being surrounded, enfolded with an atmosphere of love; the sky over him is his mother's face; the earth that nourishes him is his mother's bosom. The source, the sustentation, the defense of his being, the endless mediation betwixt his needs and the things that supply them, are all one. There is no type so near the highest idea of relation to a God, as that of the child to his mother. Her face is God, her bosom Nature, her arms are Providence -- all love -- one love -- to him an undivided bliss. (From MacDonald's essay, "A Sketch of Individual Development" in A Dish of Orts) The infant, you might say, dreams his own existence within this Mother- world. We must gently help him to wake up over time, but if we do it wisely, it will be less a matter of shattering his dream than of helping him to discover, in clear daylight, its infinitely far-reaching truth. The attempt of those panderers who push software like Babywow is to wake the child prematurely -- into a nightmare of random, meaningless stimulation. (Thanks to Joel Kahn for passing along the news item.) Imagining a Better Potato ------------------------- If you missed the exceptional article, "Playing God in the Garden", in the Oct. 25, 1998 New York Times Magazine, it's well worth looking up. Focusing on the Monsanto corporation and a genetically engineered potato, author Michael Pollan wonderfully elucidates a mad mix of science, policy, bureaucratic denseness, public ignorance, corporate arrogance, and sheer insanity, all of which coalesced into a stark fact of 1998: forty-five million acres of American farmland were planted with genetically altered crops. As to the safety of these crops, Harvard geneticist Richard Lewontin has remarked, "We have such a miserably poor understanding of how the organism develops from its DNA that I would be surprised if we don't get one rude shock after another." Nevertheless, few Americans are aware that they are eating genetically altered crops daily, and government regulating agencies have taken a number of steps to discourage the labeling that would give consumers choice in the matter. Among the revelations you'll find in Pollan's article are these: ** Some of Monsanto's potatoes have to be registered as a pesticide, because the plants produce the Bt toxin in every cell. (Bt is a bacteria-produced poison that is approved for use on crops by organic farmers.) However, you will not find any label on these potatoes informing you that you are eating a full-strength insecticide, and the bureaucratic logic behind this omission is a marvel to behold: the Food and Drug Administration says that the potato, despite being eaten by humans, is not a food, but rather a pesticide, for purposes of Federal regulation. Therefore, no label is required. The Environmental Protection Agency (which regulates pesticides) says the potato is a food, not a pesticide. Therefore, no label is required. Meanwhile, don't expect Monsanto to take such a radical step as to assume responsibility for its own actions. As Phil Angell, the director of corporate communications, says, "Monsanto should not have to vouchsafe the safety of biotech food. Our interest is in selling as much of it as possible. Assuring its safety is the FDA's job." ** The idea that farmers would plant parts of their fields as pesticide- free "refuges" to help slow down the development of insect resistance to genetically engineered pesticides turns out to be a fiction -- if not a joke -- to both farmers and Monsanto. Upon discovering this, Pollan commented, It probably shouldn't come as a big surprise that conventional farmers would have trouble embracing the notion of an insect refuge. To insist on real and substantial refuges is to ask them to start thinking of their fields in an entirely new way, less as a factory than as an ecosystem. ** Monsanto is fully aware that its insecticidal crops will result in insect resistance to one of the most effective pesticides approved for use by organic farmers. Responding to this, a company vice-president advises us not to worry, since Monsanto can easily produce new (non-organically acceptable) toxins. "Trust us", he said, presumably adding under his breath, "to destroy organic farming." A central element in industrial agriculture is monoculture -- the devotion of huge acreages to the same crop year after year. As Pollan points out, "monoculture is poorly fitted to the way nature seems to work": Very simply, a field of identical plants will be exquisitely vulnerable to insects, weeds and disease. Monoculture is at the root of virtually every problem that bedevils the modern farmer. Pollan found organic farmers working hard to adjust their fields to nature, while conventional farmers work "equally hard to adjust nature in their fields to the requirement of monoculture and, beyond that, to the needs of the industrial food chain." On the conventional side, for example, farmers engage in protracted warfare with net necrosis, a disease of potatoes. When Pollan asked an extremely successful and efficient organic farmer about this disease, the farmer replied, "That's only really a problem with Russet Burbank [potatoes], so I plant other kinds." But a neighboring conventional farmer can't do that: He's part of a food chain -- at the far end of which stands a long, perfectly golden McDonald's fry -- that demands he grow Russet Burbanks and little else. All of which illustrates that there is no single villain in this picture -- even if companies like Monsanto are doing their best to play the role. We who eat McDonald's fries take our place alongside the industrial farmer in upholding the system -- and many others stand with us. We remain largely unconscious of the fact that we are choosing between two different ways of viewing the world. Pollan captures the choice well: Monoculture is in trouble -- the pesticides that make it possible are rapidly being lost, either to resistance or to heightened concerns about their danger. Biotechnology is the new silver bullet that will save monoculture. But a new silver bullet is not a new paradigm -- rather, it's something that will allow the old paradigm to survive. That paradigm will always construe the problem in [a conventional grower's] fields as a Colorado potato beetle problem, rather than as a problem of potato monoculture. By our actions, we accede to one view or the other. It is remarkable that in an era of sophisticated systems analysis and all the rest, we find it extremely difficult to see or feel the connections between ourselves and the larger order of things. We don't experience our system-defining choices as system-defining choices. Those who do make personal choices in light of the larger picture, and who therefore raise questions about what is good for society, typically find themselves dismissed as quixotic neo-Luddites. They are charged with resisting inevitable technical progress, against which no individual should try to stand. So much for systems thinking. Happily, though, quixotic neo-Luddites have been scoring some points in agriculture. See the following article. When Technology is Smoke and Confusion -------------------------------------- I managed an organic farm back in the Seventies, so you can imagine my satisfaction in seeing organic food "go mainstream" these past few years. But I was still unprepared to come across an article in the prestigious science journal, Nature, under this heading: In comparison with conventional, high-intensity agricultural methods, "organic" alternatives can improve soil fertility and have fewer detrimental effects on the environment. These alternatives can also produce equivalent crop yields to conventional methods. (Nov. 19, 1998) There is nothing particularly obscure or difficult about the data supporting this conclusion, and the data have been readily available for decades. That the conclusion has finally appeared in the pages of Nature is less an indication of new discoveries than of cultural shifts allowing more people to open their eyes to what formerly was invisible -- invisible because incommensurate with their entire outlook. As the author of the Nature article remarks (referring to an accompanying report on an experiment with maize), "This advance is not based on a miracle of technology but is a lesson from agriculture's past that may presage its future." The article is by David Tilman and is entitled "The Greening of the Green Revolution". Tilman briefly lists some of the costs of conventional farming: contamination of groundwaters, release of greenhouse gases, loss of crop genetic diversity and eutrophication of rivers, streams, lakes and coastal marine ecosystems (contamination by organic and inorganic nutrients that cause oxygen depletion, spread of toxic species and changes in the structure of aquatic food webs). It is unclear whether high-intensity agriculture can be sustained, because of the loss of soil fertility, the erosion of soil, the increased incidence of crop and livestock diseases, and the high energy and chemical inputs associated with it. According to Tilman, half to two-thirds of all nitrogen fertilizer enters non-agricultural ecosystems, causing serious environmental problems. In the conventional plots of the maize experiment, "sixty percent more nitrate was leached into groundwater" than in the organic plots. This illustrates how "the green revolution and the large-scale livestock operations that have come with it are reminiscent of the early stages of the industrial revolution, when inefficient factories polluted without restriction." Tilman comments that the results of the maize experiment "may seem astounding, or even suspect, given the widespread use of chemical fertilizers. They are not." He reminds us that the United Kingdom's Rothamsted Experimental Station has been running similar trials continuously for over 150 years, with organically fertilized plots producing yields of wheat fully as high as the conventional plots while retaining more carbon and nitrogen in the soil. You may recall that, just when dissatisfaction with conventional education was reaching a peak less than a decade ago, with calls on every hand for reform and experiment, the Internet came along. All the energy of reform was quickly diverted toward the inordinately expensive goal of wiring every school. The educational issues disappeared behind the smoke and confusion of new technologies. The question in agriculture today, I suppose, is whether the vivid case for reform will likewise disappear -- this time behind the smoke and confusion of biotechnology, with "miraculous" quick fixes all too easily helping to sustain an underlying, pathological relation to nature. SLT Goto table of contents ========================================================================== WIRED SCHOOLS, BROKEN TRUST Lowell Monke (lm7846s@acad.drake.edu) Letter from Des Moines January 19, 1998 (This column is adapted from part of an address to the conference on "Education and Technology: Seeking the Human Essentials", Columbia Teachers College, Columbia University, December 4-6, 1997.) Four years ago an article appeared in the education section of Newsweek under the title, "We Have Seen the Future: it is in Iowa." I don't know whether it surprised anyone else, but it sure shocked a lot of us teachers in Iowa. The article was, of course, about technology -- specifically, the Iowa Communication Network (ICN), a fiber optic network the state was building to provide high-speed computer communication among all schools in the state. It turns out that the ICN has not been the panacea many thought it would be and these days it is rarely spoken of as a model for the future of education in this state, much less the country. But that hasn't stopped us from taking our new role as cutting-edge educators seriously. In fact, last year the governor's commission on education proposed putting a laptop in every student's book bag. I've heard rumors that the next step is to put satellite hookups on all of the tractors. A Contract with America's Children ---------------------------------- I, too, take my responsibility to stay out on the cutting edge seriously, so I am going to describe for you the newest high-tech product being distributed in my district. It's called the AUA. I'm fairly certain you haven't seen it touted anywhere yet. For one thing, it's not electrical; nor has anyone figured out how to sell it to schools (yet). In fact, it's just an old-fashioned page of paper -- four pages actually. Yet it could be one of the most revolutionary developments to result from the technological transformation of our schools. AUA stands for Acceptable Use Agreement. Thousands of schools across the nation already have them. Des Moines Public Schools finally adopted a fairly standard version last fall. Its purpose is simple: to set the conditions for appropriate use of the Internet in the classroom. I'm not going to include the document here; it's a lot of legalese. But to give you an idea of its effect, I want you to imagine that you have sent your eight-year-old child off to her first day of school. You have images of a bright, warm classroom, a loving teacher who immediately goes about the task of building a close, trusting relationship with your child. That afternoon your eight-year-old brings the AUA home to you, with instructions for you to read it and explain it to her so she knows the rules and consequences. Then you're supposed to sign and return it, so she can get on the Internet. You read through the document and eventually come to the section, "Liability," which reads like this: The district does not make any warranties, whether expressed or implied including those of fitness for a particular purpose with respect to any services provided by the system and any information or software contained therein. The student and his/her parents or guardians will hold the district harmless for student violations of copyright laws, software licensing requirements, student access of inappropriate materials, violations by the student of others' rights to confidentiality, free speech and privacy, and damage to systems accessed by the student. You stop for a minute to figure out what in the world this means and how you are going to explain it to your child. You move on, and when you get to the end of the AUA, you have to sign your name, right below this little reminder of what could happen should your eight-year-old not follow the rules: Violations of the acceptable use guidelines, any district policy or procedure, or any federal or state law, rule or regulation may result in disciplinary action up to and including expulsion. Violations which may be criminal will be referred to appropriate law enforcement officials. This, along with oceans of information, is what the Internet has brought to schools. It has inserted this threatening, legal document directly between the teacher and the student. It hasn't stirred much controversy, at least in my school, because it really is a legal necessity, and because, as one parent told me "It's a small price to pay to get my child on the Internet." This attitude puts a smiley face on Jacques Ellul's observation that with any technical progress, "...its harmful effects are inseparable from its beneficial effects" (1990, p 39). But Ellul also said that the harmful effects tend to be "long-term and are felt only with experience" (1990, p. 73) and that these problems tend to be more treacherous and difficult to solve than the original problem. So it might be worthwhile to think a bit about just how small a price the AUA really is. The Child as Criminal Suspect and Consumer ------------------------------------------ First, this document makes very clear that the district is giving its students access to a dangerous tool. This puts the district itself in the odd position of having to construct a legal shield to protect itself from its own students' use of the learning tools the district gives them. That is certainly an issue worth pondering. But what is revolutionary is the liability clause, in which the district disavows all responsibility for any harmful cyberspace experiences that occur to any of its students. This is radically new. In effect, the district is telling parents that not only does the district not trust their children, neither can the parents any longer trust the district to protect their children while in the classroom from the nastiness that exists in the outside world. When it comes to computer-mediated communication, in loco parentis is out, and caveat emptor is in. It's interesting to me that these agreements have been implemented all over the country with hardly a word of discussion among national education leaders. It didn't even require school board approval in my district. Here we are thirty years after the "hidden curriculum" was revealed in all its subtle indoctrinating power, and we seem to have forgotten to apply it to computers and the Internet. Maybe there aren't any consequences from treating a first grader as both criminal suspect and naive consumer. And of course, this kind of tough, distrustful atmosphere exists "out on the street." But it is something we aren't happy about, something we recognize as a coarsening of the community -- in fact, it's something we have always looked to education to help overcome. The classroom, like the home, has always been viewed as a haven against this kind of depersonalized treatment. The classroom may not have always lived up to that ideal, but the AUA engraves this dehumanization into school policy. Where are the Powers of Judgment? --------------------------------- It also typifies one of the most common effects that high technology has on education. At least one of the prices we pay for the employment of these external cognitive tools is the arrested development of many of our students' internal resources. In this case the substitution of external controls releases the student from the need to develop the inner discipline needed to use this tool "appropriately." We aren't willing to wait until the child matures sufficiently to trust him with the tool; we want to give him power now and we will stand over him with a big stick while he uses it. The long-range consequences, at least the ones I see, are disturbing. Let me use students in my Advanced Computer Technology class as an example. I have from time-to-time suggested to some of my students who are having trouble coming up with challenging projects, that they design a simple computer virus or try to break through the school's network security. Their first response is usually to ask if it would really be OK. When I tell them it is up to them, almost invariably the response is a variation of: "Hey, cool!" And off they go until I haul them back and reassert my authority. Which, again, is the point I am trying to make: once the external controls are lifted, there are no internal controls in many of these seventeen- to eighteen-year-olds to take over. It seems to me that if we are failing at anything in our schools today, we are failing to develop in our students the kinds of internal human qualities -- including ethical and moral strength -- needed to resist abusing the tremendous power we are handing them. These qualities take a great deal of time and effort to develop in a child, but I've come to believe they ought to be as much a prerequisite to using powerful computer tools as learning how to type. Trying to teach a student to harness and use appropriately the power of computer technology without those cognitive and social traits is like trying to build a skyscraper without steel. It's what forces us to rely on the external scaffolding -- the psychological prison bars -- that quasi-legal documents like the AUA provide. Shall We Limit Technology, or the Child? ---------------------------------------- None of this is new insight. The problems I see in my classroom today are ones that Joseph Weizenbaum cited over twenty years ago. He warned that in conferring on our students this enormous power we must also help them accept the immense responsibility of using it for the good of humanity. Yet at the very time when we most need to nurture and expand the inner resources of our children, we are diverting their energies toward external, mechanical activities that may make school more fun, but leave their characters untouched. Making activities easy and painless at the cost of our children's inner strength is no bargain. Having failed or given up on nurturing those inner resources, we end up with sad developments like the AUA. It seems to me that in education, as in society at large, it is time we began to take seriously Langdon Winner's essential question: How can we limit modern technology to match our best sense of who we are and the kind of world we would like to build? (1986, p xi). I think this is the most important technology question to ponder in our schools today. Unfortunately, we seem to be stuck on the inverse of it: How can we limit human beings to best match what our technologies can do and the kind of world these technologies are building? We need to turn that question around in our schools. We need to stop concentrating on outfitting our youth to meet the demands of a technologically determined 21st century, and start helping our youth develop the independence of mind and strength of character to make the future what they will it to be. To help them strengthen that will, along with the self-discipline, courage, determination and social consciousness that must accompany it, we have to start talking about limits -- not those imposed on them by legalistic AUAs, but those which we can impose on technology to help us better focus on developing the most deeply human qualities of our children. References ---------- Ellul, Jacques. 1990. The Technological Bluff. Grand Rapids: William B. Eerdmans. Weizenbaum, Joseph. 1976. Computer Power and Human Reason -- From Judgment to Calculation. New York: W. H. Freeman and Company. Winner, Langdon. 1986. The Whale and the Reactor -- A Search for Limits in an Age of High Technology. Chicago: University of Chicago Press. Goto table of contents ========================================================================== CORRESPONDENCE Does NETFUTURE Hold to a Masculine Standard? -------------------------------------------- Response to: "Can Open Standards Suffocate Us?" (NF-82) From: Rebecca Lynn Eisenberg (mars@bossanova.com) In the latest netfuture, you wrote: If there's any place where the spirit of exploration and the spirit of re-visioning should reign, it's in the classroom. Teacher and students should encounter what for both of them holds something of the unknown -- on the teacher's part because he is engaging the subject matter "live", right there before the students, rather than presenting what has already been completely structured by bureaucrats, textbook authors, software, or his own memory. With all due respect, it strikes me as highly ironic to use the so-called "neutral masculine" within the context of an article about "revolution" and rejection of "standards." The masculine is, simply, not neutral -- and using it as if it were not only conforms to (as well as reinforces) a sexist "standard," but also is not just non-revolutionary, but counter- revolutionary. Your error in this regard is not uncommon, however. It always appalled me how the vast majority of science fiction literature, film and television managed to express creativity of the future (and present) potential of technology and science -- yet displayed no creativity whatsoever in imagining a world where the sexes are equal, or even (god forbid) a society where gender does not exist. The few books that did describe such an egalitarian society -- in particular Marge Piercy's Woman on the Edge of Time -- rarely are classified as "science fiction," even though they are. Within the context of a society whose standards rarely become evident to those who benefit from them, I offer one small grain of hope: some Web site forms list "female" before "male." Now that is re-vision. All my best, rle Rebecca Lynn Eisenberg, Esq. mars@well.com * http://www.bossanova.com/rebeca Columnist, Nouveau Geek, CBS MarketWatch http://CBS.MarketWatch.Com Regular Contributor, Silicon Spin, ZDTV http://www.zdtv.com/siliconspin Columnist, Net Skink, SF Examiner http://examiner.com/skink/ Response to Rebecca Lynn Eisenberg ---------------------------------- From: Stephen L. Talbott (stevet@netfuture.org) Rebecca Eisenberg -- Please understand that I don't feel I have neatly nailed down the issues surrounding gender-neutral language. I continually quail internally at the less-than-perfect nature of my own choices. I find unsatisfactory alternatives on every hand, and have simply chosen what seems to me the least of evils. You might be interested in the brief essay I wrote on the subject. It's called "Why I Do Not Use `Gender-neutral' Language", in NF #61. There was also a follow-up letter by Joan Van Tassel in NF #66. While Van Tassel didn't comment on my main point, she nevertheless made an eloquent plea against my position. I haven't seen fit to change my usage as yet, but I don't find I can relax about it either. One thing seems clear to me, however: in our society today it is less and less possible to make the unqualified argument that the generic masculine usage helps keep women subservient and unconscious. Just the opposite: this usage seems more likely to provoke an immediate seizure of attention -- and a letter like yours. That's part of the change I referred to in my earlier essay. There may still be good reasons for rejecting the generic masculine, but the need for consciousness-raising is hardly one of them. I don't happen to agree with you that my usage is inherently sexist. (Can words be sexist apart from the meanings we give them? And don't those meanings continually change with time?) Nor am I sure what you could mean by "a society where gender does not exist" -- which sounds like a hellish place to me, one where both men and women are required to deny part of themselves. But I suspect that not much would come of our arguing these points even if we both had the time. In any case, I'm glad you stated your concern, even though it only worsens my discomfort! Steve Goto table of contents ========================================================================== ANNOUNCEMENTS AND RESOURCES The Monsanto Files ------------------ In NF #82 there was a brief story about the effects of bovine growth hormone upon the milk millions of Americans are consuming. The Monsanto corporation produces and aggressively promotes this hormone. Likewise, the current issue of NETFUTURE contains a story about a genetically engineered potato -- again the product of Monsanto. But the story of Monsanto is vastly bigger and more horrifying than these items have suggested, and you will find the larger picture in a special issue of The Ecologist (Sep./Oct., 1998) on "The Monsanto Files". It's quite an amazing story of corporate rapacity -- not a theme I've often emphasized in NETFUTURE, because it's all too easy to vilify corporations instead of assuming personal responsibility for one's own role in sustaining the vile behavior. But certainly the Monsanto story needed to be told. (I've recently been amazed at the sheer, ugly arrogance, not to mention law-breaking, of some of our largest corporations -- an arrogance encouraged, perhaps, by the widespread feeling that American business is now unstoppable, without rival on the world stage.) "The Monsanto Files" is full of articles on the company's long history of environmental abuse, its lying, it's intimidation of any who get in its way, and its depressingly easy co- option of government regulatory agencies. If this doesn't get your blood boiling, nothing will. The Ecologist is published in the United Kingdom. You can contact the subscription department at sgc@mag-subs.demon.co.uk, and the editorial department at ecologist@gn.apc.org. SLT Goto table of contents ========================================================================== ABOUT THIS NEWSLETTER Copyright 1999 by The Nature Institute. You may redistribute this newsletter for noncommercial purposes. You may also redistribute individual articles in their entirety, provided the NetFuture url and this paragraph are attached. NetFuture is supported by freely given reader contributions, and could not survive without them. For details and special offers, see http://netfuture.org/support.html . Current and past issues of NetFuture are available on the Web: http://netfuture.org/ To subscribe or unsubscribe to NetFuture: http://netfuture.org/subscribe.html. Steve Talbott :: NetFuture #83 :: January 19, 1999 Goto table of contents